One of the things I have learned as I have developed as an author is the importance of using all the senses in one's writing. How often has the lighting being used in a film for dramatic effect? This is equally as important in literature, in setting the scene and using for mood or advance the plot.
If a cloud suddenly obscures the bright sunlight then the reader knows something untoward will happen. I like to use light or lack of it with appropriate description to set the mood of the piece.
Similarly, aromas and odours, and they ARE different, can trigger memories in our own psyche that can be put to excellent use within the writing.
Also, sounds, touch, sight and feelings are all of paramount importance in placing the reader firmly in the frame. A novel without these elements is sadly lacking and less than great.
Just look at what effective lighting achieves in film, an emotive description of the light or the dark can fuel a reader's imagination and aids in setting the scene.
Often when I am doing rewrites and edits I will revisit scenes and purposefully look at the lighting within the scenes and extend the chapter. This is done seamlessly and unobtrusively and it works.
If a cloud suddenly obscures the bright sunlight then the reader knows something untoward will happen. I like to use light or lack of it with appropriate description to set the mood of the piece.
Similarly, aromas and odours, and they ARE different, can trigger memories in our own psyche that can be put to excellent use within the writing.
Also, sounds, touch, sight and feelings are all of paramount importance in placing the reader firmly in the frame. A novel without these elements is sadly lacking and less than great.
Just look at what effective lighting achieves in film, an emotive description of the light or the dark can fuel a reader's imagination and aids in setting the scene.
Often when I am doing rewrites and edits I will revisit scenes and purposefully look at the lighting within the scenes and extend the chapter. This is done seamlessly and unobtrusively and it works.